Having won two awards at The Indie Gathering and the Pittsburgh Film Workers Association Film Festival our expectations were set relatively high when we put the screener disc into the disk drive. With a running time of just 50 minutes comes Indemnity, an independent vampire horror written, directed and edited by David Dietz. Short films are notoriously tricky to get right, particularly when on a low budget; you have to grab the audience’s attention immediately and waste absolutely no time in delivering your plot whilst at the same time not overwhelming your audience.
With David Dietz also playing the lead role, the film focuses on a man called William (Dietz) who is on the run from his ex-girlfriend Angela (Crystalann Jones) who has become crazed and is trying to kill him. Taking refuge in a small town bar, he befriends and opens up to bartender Joe (Dan I Radakovich) but when a local man picks a fight with William, we begin to wonder if he really is a helpless victim or if something much more sinister (and supernatural) is afoot.
The film opens with William running through the woods in an attempt to lose his red-eyed assailant, but unfortunately due to the quality of the screener it was quite difficult to make out what was happening in these night time scenes, though I’m sure the actual DVD quality is better. Thankfully, it isn’t long before our main character finds his way to the bar in which the majority of the remainder of the film is set and the viewing quality vastly improves. However, it is once we’re in the bar that we discover the sound levels are off, which at points meant we were straining to hear the dialogue over the music.
Whilst Indemnity’s plot is, in theory, promising, it is unfortunately let down by the acting and the long-winded cheesy dialogue that, sadly, leads to the plot twists being predictable. That being said, we did warm to the character of Joe (the barman) whose over the top acting style and hamming up of traditional barman duties really worked, in a quaint kind of way. Likewise, whilst at the beginning of the film we were a little wary of Crystalann Jones’ portrayal of Angela (something just wasn’t clicking), during the final scenes when Angela finally catches up with William you can tell that she is really enjoying the scenes and totally comes into her own, really stealing the spotlight.
Looking at the film objectively, it may have been better to cast someone else in the lead role other than Dietz himself who was obviously so heavily involved in the pre-production. It was kind of like how Tarantino gives himself an acting spot in all of his films and it just never seems to work out. Although the film was far from perfect, the premise of the film is good, the pacing was great and it does show some real promise for any future work from Dietz.
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You can also buy the DVD here.
Solid review. I agree. I saw this a while ago (my friend had the DVD)… I found myself laughing at the cliche’s and stereotypes, but I thought that was purposeful. Some cringe moments in the pub with cheesy one liners. Picked up on the sound levels too on the DVD copy, especially in the pub with background music on too loud. Familiar with the director now, so look forward to horror-esque improvements in the next one.
Thank you for your comment, Roxanne.
Yes, I think you’re probably right that the cliches and stereotypes are purposeful, but overall it was just too much and distracted from the plot.
I think this will be a strong learning curve for Dietz and I look forward to seeing his next project.
Thanks for the honest critique, Roxanne! I’m gratified that you found something to enjoy in my first film. I definitely hope to improve on my next one. I hope I can count on you to watch! If you want to see any more stuff, please check out my web site and that of my production company: zd3productions.com!
Hi David! Thanks for the note 🙂 Really cool to hear, and yes you can surely count on me. Love watching new films/short films, and always keen to see fresh new horror talent. Thanks for the link, will have a peak! Good luck with your next creative ventures…